Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
The dramatic increase in a large number of advertisements in recent years has sparked controversy over the potential impacts of this trend. In my view, I consider it to be a positive development.
In the first place, it is important to recognize that one of the key functions is to provide customers with adequate and accurate information about all of the alternatives available to them. This will allow them to constantly stay up to date with the latest advancement in almost all fields ranging from fashion to technology. New versions of Oppo phones, for instance, advertised on television, supply viewers with information about their improved functions.
Advertising also plays a significant role in fostering full employment and facilitating economic well-being by disseminating marketing information to the target audience. This speeds the consumers' acceptance of new goods and technologies. It guarantees the high turnover rate of the manufactured items and therefore, the sustainability of a business. What is more, promoting products is likely to generate a wide range of job creation. In other words, it affords occupations to artists, painters or copywriters in designing and preparing logos, contents or ideas for advertisements.
In short, advertising suggests what buyers need and makes a substantial contribution to economic progress. In this sense, advertisements are of great value to citizens and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
The dramatic increase in a large number of advertisements in recent years has spar...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...adequate and accurate information about all of the alternatives available to them. This wi...
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Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...to the target audience. This speeds the consumers acceptance of new goods and technologie...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ial contribution to economic progress. In this sense, advertisements are of great...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in short, in my view, in other words, what is more, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59633027523 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3813158475 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669724770642 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3491704445 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963088084772 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322594552725 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320055628785 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056111799167 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218247046867 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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