Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it positive or negative development?
In recent years, Advertisements which are more and more popular in daily life have been receiving a great public attention. This trend has both benefits and drawbacks.
There are two major disadvantages of having so many advertisements. The first drawback is that it may cost a large of money for advertising. For example, if an organization wanted to advertise their products, they would have to pay for people who make advertisements. This leads to an increase in the price of products and services. Another drawback is that advertising encourages people to buy things that they do not really need. Apple’s marketing and advertising campaigns, for instance, make me buy the latest version of IPhone even though my old phone still works well.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, The popularity of advertisements also brings a wide range of benefits. Firstly, advertisements provide a lot of information about products and services for customers. For example, by watching TV commercials about brands of shampoo products, I can choose the one that is better for me and know which product is cheaper. As a result, people can make better shopping choices. Secondly, Advertising can rise people’s awareness about product development. In fact, Advertising helps people understand more about modern gadgets such as smartphones. My nephew, for instance, knows a lot about technological devices such as IPhone, Samsung,… Because he watches many advertisements of digital devices on TV.
In conclusion, in my opinion the increase of advertisements in daily life has both beneficial and detrimental effects.
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also, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42629482072 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21472718616 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0404171537 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162972235906 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540169979904 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070385947866 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120038428827 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685740808303 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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