Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?
Many high street shops was replaced by the online shopping websites due to is advantages. This essay will discusse about positive and negative side of this matter.
High street shops are facing with rocket competitive from online shoping website because it allows customers to select profitable products quickly when they just seat comfortablely at home. Then make the purchases in a second and receive such items in next few days. This is imposible when customers go to traditional shops and try to compare the price or pick up the best discount stocks within a few minutes. Last week, I just bought a pair of shoes on Shoppee website with the design I like and I cannot find those kind of model when I visit to local stores.
On the other hand, online shopping behaviour is shifted from traditional bricks-and-mortar stores has changed the labour market. While entrepreneurs hire the huge amount of IT technology to develop their website instead of the sale employee as before. It can lead a increase the unemployment rate in un-skilled workers. However this is the world of choice when it must be a solution of people cannot leave their home because of Covid-19 pandamic, almost company let their staffs working at home obey gorvernment instructions.
As a customer, going shopping online is more convinience than local store and waste too much my time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...ith the design I like and I cannot find those kind of model when I visit to local stores. ...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he sale employee as before. It can lead a increase the unemployment rate in un-sk...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nemployment rate in un-skilled workers. However this is the world of choice when it mus...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9649122807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72185787852 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4265574658 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146406672017 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554957197118 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632424034945 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102300019532 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964776368061 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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