Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is a fact that advertisements are gaining more attention on a daily basis. In my opinion, despite a number of inconveniences, this trend should be considered as a very welcome development.
On one hand, critics of advertising tend to point out a combination of reasons. First and foremost, commercials manipulate people, particularly young citizens. It aims to persuade consumers that buying a product will make them happier. We are convinced to follow the latest trends to be more glamorous and a feeling of a high-status person. To illustrate, one way of explaining this is that buyers of all ages love online shopping, especially at night time, when we feel tired, lonely. Therefore, they are likely to purchase random things or even the same outfit that they bought a week ago, simply to make them feel more valuable and fashionable. Another compelling reason is that advertisers often aim their marketing at children because they can easily be influenced by appealing advertisements. Consequently, money and possessions are considered to be more important than family and friends in today's consumer society due to the fact that teenagers put pressure on parents to buy them things without caring for their loved ones.
On the other hand, in spite of the downsides given above, I believe that this trend should be considered sd progress. The primary reason is that it is a key part of modern business because not only companies need to tell customers about their products but also inform people about the choices they have so that they can choose the one which fits them the most. Furthermore, advertising is a creative industry that employs many people. Without it, there would be higher unemployment and sometimes life will also be boring.
In conclusion, I believe that although advertising should be regulated so it cannot always encourage consumers to buy some useless, unhealthy things. The attention more and more citizens put on advertisements is a worthwhile development because it creates demand for goods in order to boost consumption and make the economy grow bigger.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96300028053 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604105571848 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3578719591 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161075175814 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549428563689 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676604995702 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11093701657 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567892102363 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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