Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
In modern society, the popularity of advertisings is growing enormously. therefore, there are some doubts about its uses. In my view, it has a number of benefits but it also brings some drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several positive aspects in advertisements. Firstly, adverts are a key of modern business. Thanks to advertisements, the proportion of products that businesses have sold increases sharply. Because of frequent appearance, people tend to click to dip in their products and buy things they want. therefore, businesses advertisements as a part of attracting clients. Secondly, advertising inform us about the choices we have. if you are wondering about the products that you need, it will be useful to find them on the internet. there are huge advertisements about them and you can choose one that is suitable for your aim. Finally, it is a creative industry that employs many people. Due to the fame of advertisements, severe jobs have been created like bloggers, reviewers, etc. Consequently, a large amount of people have opportunities to have a job that they are absorbed in.
On the other hand, advertising also accompany with negative effects. At first, it manipulates people. we are easily persuaded to follow the latest trend. Although there are a large number of things that can use well, we still spend money buying things that isn't necessary. Accordingly, we will be possibly flat broke. In addition, children put pressure on parents to buy them things. if children see some toys they like on the magazines or the internet, they will insist their parents in buying those for them. And it will be difficult for poor parents to have enough money to afford them.
To sum up, advertising have both pros and cons. Hence, people should be deliberate when wanting to buy things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90229602595 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4667787804 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.875 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.20833333333 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0586550418769 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192916352723 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321483624077 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366675650792 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00759116530121 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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