Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, the growth of businesses has led to the ubiquitous appearance of advertisements which can be seen easily in daily life. From my perspective, this tendency brings people merits and demerits simultaneously.
On the one hand, advertising plays a crucial role not only for businesses but also for customers. To organizations, it creates more revenues, which contributes to the prosperity and fame of companies. With creative and flexible content, a catchy melody, and a unique logo, it helps citizens be aware of that brand and support the company through attractive billboard endorsements. For instance, with an attractive logo and advertisement campaign, Nike has gained a significant profit from the advertising and became one of the most famous brands in the world. To individuals, it broadens customers' diverse choices and varieties of products. People can have comparisons between these goods through the commercials and prices to purchase goods that fit their needs.
On the other hand, it might bring negatives for individuals that can not be ignored. To begin with. It is considered that commercials can not be entirely accurate with the product they advertise. Some marketers are inclined to employ tricks and gimmicks in order to incite buyers to purchase goods that are different from the products they have shown before. Thus, it results in the dissatisfaction of customers. Additionally, some advertisements are established in the form of deception. To individuals who are not tech-savvy, should they click the mouse on an unknown link of an advertisement on the Internet, they will be deceived by a large amount of property.
In conclusion, although the omnipresence of commercials has brought society advantages for economic growth, it still possesses disadvantages for individuals and administrations.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45104895105 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28651427756 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.762137912 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918265302306 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273657500925 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350315253489 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462774378422 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295193820175 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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