Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising industry is becoming increasingly so widespread that no one can avoid the sound and images of advertisements, and people claim that this phenomenon brings about many benefits to their communities. While I cannot deny the positive points of advertisement, I believe that its drawbacks cannot be ignored.
On the one hand, watching and investing in advertisements are attractive for some reasons. In terms of companies themselves, they use effective and creative adverts to reach their target customers, leading to the increase in sales and profits. Also, the development of advertising expands job opportunities for a large number of individuals such as editors, copywriters, assistances. Regarding customers, some informative advertisements may provide details about products and services in the market, enabling customers to choose the suitable ones among the bewildering range. For example, with the availability of adverts, those who want to book a holiday of a lifetime can make the right choice of accommodation and destination, which suit their pockets.
On the other hand, it seems to me that advertising causes considerable disadvantage for innocent customers. Firstly, these days, advertisements are too prevalent that no one can escape their power, whether they are commercials, online advertisements or even telemarketing, disturbing our privacy. A typical example will be the times I have received regular phone calls from telesales staff, while I need relaxation or concentration. Furthermore, people are tempted by sound and visual effects of adverts to make an impulsive purchase, which are unnecessary and unaffordable. Moreover, some companies tried to exaggerate or distort the quality of their products, leading to our disappointment.
In conclusion, due to the reasons mentions, I am convinced that advertising is both advantageous and dis advantageous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...vertising expands job opportunities for a large number of individuals such as editors, copywriter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78647686833 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44808455761 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0082173396 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147388115378 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509676151136 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345114086541 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851201262569 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262353903396 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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