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In the long process of studies, you can at last master writing of one kind of paper, and there at once appears a dilemma – how to write a good essay to compare and contrast or criticize topics. The difficulty may also appear with a topic, as there is so much of them with their peculiar features. However, there should be some magic formula you may consider and you will be right. To make your academic writing easier, we will present you a list of features your essay should include.

Recently, I've seen an idea of essay writing compared to military strategy. The essence is the following. Ancient military tactics meant for gathering all the troops together, wounding the strongest of them at the front and back. They were strong and impenetrable. The same is with academic writing – presenting a strong and thought-provoking introduction, you will manage to achieve success with any type of academic paper. Take care about the shape of your paper to reach the level of professional writing service writers. What else should be mentioned in the paper?

Analyze the information you know and that you've found, while carrying out the research. Having a good base of knowledge, you will be able to analyze the presented arguments and define the claims, as well as the reasons and evidence.
The first thing to take into consideration, while thinking how to write a good essay, is writing a thesis statement – the main idea of your paper. It should be ultimately precise and short and analyzed throughout the whole paper. Each new idea ought to support the general thesis and written as a separate paragraph.
Check out free essay samples on the Internet to get to know how to express your ideas and how to support them. Each professional writing service demonstrates samples of previously written works, which are published on their websites.
At the end of essay writing, think over the conclusion and introduction. Try to write something memorable in both of them – a quotation, a thought-provoking idea, a call to action, or something like this. These two essay parts may be the same, but sound in a different way.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, kind of, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85989010989 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74432123814 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0051155484 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2380952381 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118816992241 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404420369784 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606485818137 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637154053696 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370457186366 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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