Nowadays,advertising is play major role for sell products but sometimes products mismatch from advrtisement. Here, I would like to discribe dark side of ads.
To initiate with, all we know advertising industries is wide industries. Ads are attrect people to purchase things and also tempted to buy product. For instance current situation some perfumes ads is most popular for no gas perfumes but actual product not same as shown in ads.
Furthermore, publicity world is dangerous and harmless world for the food industries. Young generation are easily attract junk food ads and buy it. For example, nowadays burger advertising are favourite in teenage groups but they do not no ingredients are use in bueger are harmless for our body.
Moreover, advertisement discourages people from being deliver different product by making us all want do the same and look in ads. For illustrate in ads new model of cars color are constrasting which shown in advertising.
To sum up with my opinion people do not dependent only on advertising because its also causes of problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , advertising
Nowadays,advertising is play major role for sell products bu...
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Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: FOR_SELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for sale'?
Suggestion: for sale
...Nowadays,advertising is play major role for sell products but sometimes products mismatc...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attracted'.
Suggestion: attracted
...industries. Young generation are easily attract junk food ads and buy it. For example, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14942528736 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0551801977 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0555958679 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201202101212 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766364699304 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148231718285 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121702176911 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130633498005 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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