The aging population is good for business, the economy and society. Others disagree. Discuss both be used and give your opinion.
It is often argued that economic growth, social development and associations can be benefitted by the older people. Whilst, other disagree. This essay will discuss both the views. Firstly, I will explain, older workers bring valuable experience and knowledge to the workforce, secondly; they create burdens on state budget and health care systems.
One of the significant advantage of having older workers in the workforce is their experience and knowledge gained from years of working in their field. The experience which older people bring to their jobs can help them to solve difficult situations. In addition, aged people tends to be more satisfied in their jobs which leads them not to change their job very frequently. For example, in many countries are number of companies allow their fresher workers to be trained under old experienced workers in order to get the same values from them and to teach them the office culture.
However, many disagree, and feel that elderly workers puts strains on the government's finance as well as health care industry. Authorities have to pay excessive amount of money for older people in different sources like food, shelter and medicine. This money can be disbursed on other essentials such as transportation, infrastructure. Due to increasing illness and the diseases in older people, the demand of health services are also increasing which directly results into financial pressure on the government. For instance, many organisations give more allowance of money to old workers rather than youngers. Because of which young aspirants pressurize the associations to be treated equally.
In conclusion, although the older employees possesses expertise knowledge in their sectors, they are creating pressure on governmental financial services and medical facilities. I think older workers are more beneficial for the organisations, social progress and wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49319727891 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88370588604 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.201238314 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970766116778 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390452400142 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363228577485 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587814614418 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250786418468 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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