Air pollution is one of the largest problems facing the world today. What are its causes and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?
The technological leap results in numerous of consequences, one of them includes air pollution which has became a hotly debated topic for the government. Over a lengthy period of time, people have discovered the reasons as well as came up with practical solutions to fix the situation.
First and foremost, an increase in the demand for using vehicles creates detrimental impacts on the atmosphere. Transportation as a whole releases a significant amount of carbon dioxide which is the main cause for global warming. Moreover, the behavior of cutting down bountiful area of forests contributes to the causes. As a result, we have to live with a higher level of greenhouse gas. Furthermore, instead of carrying out actions benefiting the environment, human constantly makes use of fuels for their own advantages. It is noticed that firms and industries have indeed over utilized these resources in their process of production.
Fortunately, due to the early recognition of the issue, people around the world have thought of imaginative ways to minimize the effects of air pollution and at the same time managing the causes. It seems that there is an improvement on citizens’ habits after multiple of propagations. Public transport and eco-friendly cars are prioritized. Educating children about the danger of environmental problems also received positive feedbacks. Taxes imposed on industrial action by the government reduces the consumption.
In general, eliminating the causes for air pollution and finding ways to solve the problems are important to maintain a suitable living environment for everyone
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...opic for the government. Over a lengthy period of time, people have discovered the reasons as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14498712239 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2073615714 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113303036517 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307263618368 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496542157392 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805452101991 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579634952493 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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