In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is predicted that in the next few years, newspapers and books will vanish due to the development of ebook. Nevertheless, i vehemently disagree with this opinion.
The foremost reason for the popularity of online book is convenience. It is portable so people can seek and read it everywhere. Secondly, it is inexpensive even if it can be free. In the reality, most of consumers are attracted by things that are unpaid. For ex: a copious amount of money is saved from purchasing books. Upsides stemming from online magazines and newspapers are undeniable. There is no barrier for people to approach online data. However, problems pertaining to metal and physical issues are inevitable
In spite of practical benefits of online books, i still hold beliefs that printing newspapers has far outweigh advantages. It provides readers with the feeling of comfortable and genuine. Printed items often more reliable and trustworthy. Books are checked meticulously before being published. the blind are beneficial from paper books as braille board. Even though buyers have to spend extra dollars, their eyes are surely maintained in a good condition. Moreover, old books can be passed on for people who need especially those children residing in poor households.
To sum up, online books and printed books have valuable advantages. Even so, i still insist on the fact that printed books wont be altered by online version
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, even so, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2096069869 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631290701 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9078151072 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2777777778 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7222222222 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197697434396 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589537635681 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412181670736 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129897531998 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322255992617 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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