In last decades population in all continents rapidly growth and it is predicted that this trend will continue even rapidly. Undoubtedly majority of population seeking to settle in big cities, which are mostly overpopulated and local councils targeting to parks as a new residential and commercial territories. However, despite the need of new houses and retail places, I disagree that the solution of using parks for this purpose for two reasons.
Firstly, from developing of the first park in New York, in 1900, city dwellers are going to parks to find a peace and relax from everywhere noise and traffic. Parks are mostly mix of trees, ponds and green lands with benches, therefore, white collars as well as mother with their child finding parks as a place of joy. I concede that many city parks are occupied by homeless and intoxicated individuals, who are making many parks less joyful. However, many city councils assigned rangers and cooperate with police force in purpose to reduce this negative aspect.
Last but not least, parks are oasis of every town. Increasing number of cars in cities cause that many cities are highly polluted by exhausted fumes. Trees and another flora in parks, helps to reduce this negative consequence of modern life. Take New York's Central Park for example. Several researches in last decades proved that presence of the Central park reduces greenhouse effect in 30 per cent.
In short, despite the urgent needs of accommodation and retail spaces, I strongly believe that reconstructing parks in purpose of city development, will result of lowering people's happiness, but also even more damage environment. Therefore, I suggest to find another, eco-friendly solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
In last decades population in all continents rapidly gr...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'mixed', 'mixt'.
Suggestion: mixed; mixt
...ere noise and traffic. Parks are mostly mix of trees, ponds and green lands with be...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest finding'.
Suggestion: suggest finding
...n more damage environment. Therefore, I suggest to find another, eco-friendly solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21014492754 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69616833145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4093447767 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146030909887 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522517416691 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052016395207 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888335254345 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051993074643 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.