Although more and more people need news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, people are facing the issue of choosing where to update news. Some claim that newspaper will remain the most important news delivery despite the development of the Internet. In my opinion, I am not totally agree with the statements.
Internet news is being used more and more frequently in the recent year as the result of two main reasons. First of all, it is a quick method to access the news. With few simple clicks and types on the computer, it is possible to reach almost up-to-second information about any event occuring. Furthermore, with the development of the Internet, people can be informed imediately if there is any groundbreaking news exist. Second reason I want to mention is that the Internet obtains a wide range of information with quick access. Provided that, someone has to suks for some event happened long time ago, it would be difficult to find the newspaper wrote about it among a mountain of them. Instead, by typing the keywords on the Internet, the news about the event will appear on the screen within a short time.
However, a number of people keep reading newspaper because of various reason. The newspaper industry has developed in a long period, which has been playing an important role in people’s daily life. Newspaper not only contains spotlight views to the public but also is a mean of leisure. While reading newspaper, people can find news about what happening in the society, as well as get themselves relax with entertaining part such as fun story, and so on. In addition, newspapr is a genuine source, where people always rely on the given information. Recently, the public has witnessed a bulk of false news on the Internet due to its accessibility without authorization or control. In contrast, a news or a series, if it wanted to be publicized, must undergo a process of editoring, examing, … in order to be published on the newspaper.
In conclusion, the Internet has its own superiority, however, the newspaper remain an important source of news in daily routine.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91860465116 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82191838365 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566860465116 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1717996288 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351938648919 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104439268808 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847481666062 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232414133803 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492257212236 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.