Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advance of technology, digital communication has exerted a considerable influence on the public’s recreation of reading news online. One argues that regardless of the widespread of electronic news, there is no substitute for newspaper as the main source of news provision. While newspaper is informatively beneficial, I believe that electronic news will hold a vital position with respect to mass media.
The major reason why the majority of readers have diverted their affection from traditional newspapers to online news is perhaps the limitless access to up-to-date information. As opposed to longing for the exact publishing date of the magazines, with the aid of the Internet, readers could promptly gain insights into current affairs which is continuously updated. Furthermore, by accessing to news on websites, readers have an opportunity to be exposed to visual messages alongside the articles, such as videos and live broadcasts. This approach therefore serves as an advantage of digital media which may not seem feasible for the traditional coverage.
Opponents of the notion may argue that readers may be distracted by the wide range of fake news disseminated online; as a result, they may find it struggling to discriminate between official and fake information. This opposition may be sensible, but in fact, there have been a variety of private as well as governmental media corporations that operate online and offline, aiming to inform the residents with confirmed coverage of diverse fields, namely The New York Times. On account of that, the drawback would not act as a deterrent to the residents’ exposure to the confirmed news on the Internet.
To recapitulate, I think that online coverage would take control over traditional newspaper to be the dominant source of news. However, the readers should be wise when selecting a reliable website that provides official news.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38127090301 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05491621148 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4172264839 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198756786945 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808493781678 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597239762354 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127192813926 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634159078338 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.