Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain
the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether newspapers are inclined to prevail as a significant treasure of information due to the exponential development of online news. From my perspective, I advocate this mindset in the light of several compelling reasons.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that online news does a favor for dwellers in society these days. To begin with, this information has been updated every single minute which is contributable to the fact that people always remain up-to-date. To illustrate this point, some breaking events have been interesting objects and citizens are able to find news on their smart devices when breaking news occurs. Additionally, by using the Internet, users can easily obtain information rather than go to the shop and buy a magazine. In fact, it takes an amount of time to verify and publish news in newspapers. Given this, it is understandable why online news has been omnipresent in this day and age.
However, I strongly believe that newspapers have been playing an indispensable role and no be overshadowed by other sources of news. First, it is the most authentic and precise information which humans can depend on. To be more specific, publishers have to gather and authenticate in order to produce any piece of news which means that it has high trustworthiness. In comparison with online news, it sometimes cannot be tested, leading to the misunderstanding of readers. Furthermore, not almost of people are able to use smart gadgets to read the news. For instance, according to Vnexpress, 37% of the elderly find it challenging to grasp information by using smartphones. Besides, people who usually take news through the Internet think that reading e-readers cause considerable eyestrain. Therefore, people tend to use newspapers and magazines with the view of updating information.
To conclude, although the widespread of online news in this era, it is my conviction that newspapers will continue their role due to its authenticity and harmlessness to the eyes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... been playing an indispensable role and no be overshadowed by other sources of new...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...ns that it has high trustworthiness. In comparison with online news, it sometimes cannot b...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grasping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: grasping
... 37% of the elderly find it challenging to grasp information by using smartphones. Besid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29813664596 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12512489623 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6949495975 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280012955407 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818031920297 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498848393546 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15266149935 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653325543578 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.