Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, people tend to use the internet to read news, however, some people point out that the most crucial source of information about society or policy is newspapers and people have to stay behind them. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement.
Overall, there are numerous reasons why this trend has a lot of benefits. One reason for this trend could be that living in advance of technology, everyone has at least an intelligent device, such as mobile phones, tablets, and laptops that are very useful for them, and offers them to read news whenever or wherever they like. In fact, the internet is able to provide up-to-the-minute news as it happens, 24 hours a day every day. To take myself as a demonstration, I really keen on sports, especially football, after waking up, as a daily routine, when I took a bus to go to my university, I will have access to Vietnamnet to read the football news in order to know the result of a match or transfer information of my favorite team, which offers me convenience and I am likely to savor read news during the trip.
In contrast, newspapers have an abundance of drawbacks, which affect the environment. In the first place, there is a large number of trees cut down to manufacture newspapers. In fact, annually, toxic gas is discharged by vehicles, such as cars and motorbikes, which contributes citizens to suffering from health troubles, namely pneumonia, trees play a vital role in human life, which helps the environment to be unpolluted. In addition, modern views have broken the barriers, reading news on the internet, is totally free and residents will not pay any fees, which leads everyone can afford it.
To sum up, reading news is an indispensable part of society and choosing the way to read is also essential. I would argue that the newspapers will continue to decline in importance, and more and more people use the internet to read the news that would be tendance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...vironment. In the first place, there is a large number of trees cut down to manufacture newspaper...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ees cut down to manufacture newspapers. In fact, annually, toxic gas is discharge...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nufacture newspapers. In fact, annually, toxic gas is discharged by vehicles, suc...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...helps the environment to be unpolluted. In addition, modern views have broken the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, at least, in addition, in contrast, in fact, such as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81305637982 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79752249877 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590504451039 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5462346914 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305004258887 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100336851824 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102771907805 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199773357695 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100743769789 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.