Sending criminals to prison is not a good method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people point out that offenders should be provided with education and vocational training instead of being imprisoned. I partly agree with this idea because while those who commit petty crimes can receive education and vocational training, serious criminals deserve to be sent to prison.
On the one hand, education and job training can be good ways to support minor criminals. The first reason is that further education programs provided offenders with a number of valuable lessons, offering them an increased awareness of unlawful acts. This allows them to avoid committing crimes repeatedly. Furthermore, the government is expected to provide petty crimes vocational training, which will help them to get a job and reintegrate into society after being released from prison, and therefore they can gain respect from citizens. If the offender is not authorized to attend education or job training programs, they would continue to re-offend in criminal activities.
On the other hand, it is imperative to put violent criminals into prison. Firstly, the authority is supposed to isolate major crimes by means of sending them to prison, which will deter them from keep doing illegal acts. This could ensure the safety of society. Secondly, these harsh punishments, such as longer prison sentences, might reduce the proportion of offenders. This helps the government to save a huge amount of money and human resources in the supervision and feeding of prisoners.
In conclusion, education has always played an indispensable part in human lives and turns one's life around but it is only proper for petty crimes. The dangerous criminal should send to jail in order to increase the safety of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31365313653 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71418205383 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6975777799 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289438768936 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890674599411 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538370658773 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155098752562 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662418303844 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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