Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important sources of news. Do you agree or disagree?
A school of thought holds the view that despite the increase in the number of residents using the Internet to read news, newspapers still play a vital role in news sources. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this viewpoint for several reasons.
On the one hand, I firmly believe that reading newspapers is out of date in recent years. It can be clearly seen that only the elderly read this form of information because of their habits. Meanwhile, there are a few of the young generations who are interested in newspapers because they will have to wait for the newspaper to be published. Another compelling reason is that it will cost people an amount of money to purchase newspapers. In contrast, if they do not have any money, they can not have the news they want.
On the other hand, it will be more convenient for people to access new information on the Internet. This can be explained by the fact that technology has developed at a fast speed in today’s society so that people can find what they want immediately. For instance, if they use the search tools to find information about a math problem, it only takes them about one to two seconds to show them lots of related results. Furthermore, there are plenty of news sources on the Internet about many different fields so people can read both national and international news at home instead of going out to buy newspapers.
In conclusion, I strongly reckon that online news can substitute newspapers in the near future because of its rapidity, convenience, and freely available information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...y of news sources on the Internet about many different fields so people can read both national...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82156133829 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76888044386 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3294489607 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.083333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25751751727 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887792759445 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666318512896 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145330476173 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372987043014 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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