Although more and more people read news on the internets. The traditional newspaper will remain the most important source of news.
With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of socio-economic dilemmas.Indeed, people debates that conventional newspaper will be continue the most main source of news. Although traditional newspapers have beneficial to some extents, I totally concur with this statement.
First and foremost, there are several reason why people who specially adult prefer to read print newspapers which are irreplaceable despite the growing popularity of digital news in modern society. Firstly, Print newspapers give readers a sense of legitimacy so most information are often more reliable than that news on the internet. As the result of this, it normally becomes an effective tool of government media. Secondly, most people complained that it will be eyestrain and tear drop when humans read electrical newspapers for a long time. As a consequence, it often makes people a lot of trouble and affects to their health seriously. Additionally, there are no pop-up advertisements in print newspaper so that people can read reflect on a certain piece of news with great concentration. Furthermore, traditional newspapers could bring the knowledge to remote area where need to improve the awareness and rise standard of living. It may supports information to the people without internet network and electronic devices.
In conclusion, although electrical newspaper will develop as sky-rocketing in the near future, I would maintain that I concur with the development of conventional newspapers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lifestyles'' or 'lifestyle's'?
Suggestion: lifestyles'; lifestyle's
With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of socio-economic di...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Indeed
...a wide range of socio-economic dilemmas.Indeed, people debates that conventional newsp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60526315789 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2643602765 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0018011875 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365584240751 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112468168703 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694874560452 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20926248284 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090005402798 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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