Although more and more people read news on the internets. The traditional newspaper will remain the most important source of news.
With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of of socio-economic dilemmas. Indeed people debates that conventional newspaper will be continue the most main source of news. Although traditional newspaper have beneficial to some extents. I totally concur with this statement.
First and foremost, there are several season why people who specially adult prefer to read print newspapers which are irreplaceable despite the growing popularity of digital news in modern society. Firstly, Print newspapers give readers a sense of legitimacy so most information are often more reliable than that news on the internet. As the result of this, it normally becomes an effective tool of government media. Secondly, most people complained that it will be eyestrain and tear drop when humans read electrical newspapers for a long time. As a consequence, it often makes people a lot of trouble and affects to their health seriously. Additionally, there are no pop-up advertisements in print newspaper so that people can read reflect on a certain piece of news with great concentration. Furthermore, traditional newspapers could bring the knowledge to remote area where need to improve the awareness and rise standard of living. It may supports information to the people without internet network and electronic devices.
In conclusion, although electrical newspaper will develop as sky-rocketing in the near future, I would maintain that I concur with the development of conventional newspapers.
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- Although more and more people read news on the internets. The traditional newspaper will remain the most important source of news. 56
- Although more and more people read news on the internets. The traditional newspaper will remain the most important source of news. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lifestyles'' or 'lifestyle's'?
Suggestion: lifestyles'; lifestyle's
With the proliferation of contemporary lifestyles comes a wide range of of socio-economic...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...temporary lifestyles comes a wide range of of socio-economic dilemmas. Indeed people ...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...de range of of socio-economic dilemmas. Indeed people debates that conventional newspa...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... continue the most main source of news. Although traditional newspaper have beneficial t...
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Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'seasons'?
Suggestion: seasons
... First and foremost, there are several season why people who specially adult prefer t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55652173913 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18780758552 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.361832534 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365584240751 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10583211866 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912019951497 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20926248284 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090005402798 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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