Although riding bicycle brings enormous health and environment benefits, the time taken to travel is more compared to other forms of transports
Some people argue that using the bicycle as the primary form of transport has a lot of benefits, however, others believe that there are many drawbacks. Although riding bicycle brings enormous health and environment benefits, the time taken to travel is more compared to other forms of transports. I believe that the advantages are eclipsed by the disadvantages.
Riding bicycle has enormous benefits which help an individual to be healthier and protects the environment from hazardous gases. Cycling is considered as a good exercise to improve health. Also, the exhaust fumes from other vehicles pollute the environment so it is wise to use a bicycle for commuting. It is recommended that government should take initiatives to encourage people to use a bicycle because of its advantages.
On the other hand, although there a lot of advantages of using a bicycle, the major disadvantage is that it takes more time to travel. Using bicycle as the main form of transport will consume more time particularly during the rush hours in major cities. It also requires more physical energy to drive a bicycle which adds more time. For example, if an average person takes 15 minutes of time to travel a distance of 15 miles in a car, it would take more than an hour to commute the same distance in a bicycle. Hence most people prefer other fast vehicles over a bicycle.
To conclude Although riding bicycle brings enormous health and environment benefits, the time taken to travel is more compared to other forms of transports. I believe that the advantages are overshadowed by the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...commute the same distance in a bicycle. Hence most people prefer other fast vehicles ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03018867925 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83766057708 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479245283019 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1198432444 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.591322679304 0.244688304435 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211421289003 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.273840891645 0.0667982634062 410% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.442916232078 0.151304729494 293% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229752959526 0.056905535591 404% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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