An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Time flies, dragging the emergence of an erroneous view that the future is far more crucial and valuable than the hostile present. I, however, ascertain that living for the present time is the most practical advice for those who long for happiness and fulfillment.
Admittedly, a desire for a better life lures struggled people in order to ignore their present situations. Some lament that it is worth devoting time and endeavors for a higher purpose in the future despite the hardship they are facing. That is why the multitudes who absolutely put their belief in that motivated statement have decanted a huge budget to gambling with the bright hope for great fortunes in the near future. However, no one can predict how the future comes as well as how life is. What the future brings to humans is uncertain; therefore, it is a good guess that the more a person expects, the higher chance of failure they get. This suggests that instead of waiting for something uncertain, it seems to be better to have a happy life now.
Furthermore, Humans’ solely surviving purpose is to adapt and satisfy the demands at present. A fact that on no account is there to anticipate the future; nevertheless, the present outcome is practical and tangible. The lifespan of a person can last 120 years at most; however, there are thousands of unexpected accidents transpiring that end up the valuable life. Therefore, it is advisable that humans should spend valuable wealth to gain what they need now that there is only one life to live. In developing countries where residents keep a fixed mindset that saving for the rainy day, they normally have a miserable and unhappy life. Moreover, there is a woeful fact that domestic violence in these nations is much higher compared to other developed countries. It is revealed that housewives who are under physical attacks from their husbands simply think that their spouses will think twice and modify bad manners and behaviors in the very near future. With that unpractical hope, they have experienced a miserable life with dark bruises on most of their bodies for several years.
By way of conclusion, I suppose that paying attention at present time must be the best option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...esire for a better life lures struggled people in order to ignore their present situat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, i suppose, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91443850267 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57596974374 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3456904872 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.117647059 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103236060799 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353227904811 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039325558507 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773302163668 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255883062671 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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