Topic: Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Violent crimes occuring has a close parallel with the social development; therefore, ways to punish the involving criminals have become a controversial discussion. Some people support the death penalty for those who offended violent crimes; in contrast, others say that capital punishment is too extreme to be used in the modern world. Although the death penalty has both drawbacks and benefits, I think people should apply this punishment in society.
First of all, the death penalty woefully does not give criminals any opportunities to reform. In psychology, it has been proved that people’s personalities are always modified in order to adapt to the environment or a certain situation. Similarly, the offenders who commit heinous crimes might change their minds if they are given enough time to meditate their deviant behavior. For example, there is a case that the offender did not murder deliberately/ intentionally; consequently, he had been imprisoned for about ten years instead of receiving capital punishment.
However, death penalty also has some advantages which help to exert a better society. Firstly, I assume that a capital punishment is a kind of deterrent against major crimes. Criminals seem to think that they will be released anyway no matter how terribly did they do if there is no death penalty. On the other hand, offenders are mind constructed that their lives will be risky if they do not abide by the laws. For instance,a , so he is deterred by the teacher in different ways with the ultimate goal is to construct the boy’s mind of anxiety. Wonderfully, the boy did change his heart after he had heard a load of threats from his teacher.
Another good point of capital punishment is to bring back society’s relief. People obviously do not believe in the offenders’ conscience; they often show their nervousness toward any information about the release of some infamous criminals. Illustratively, there are several articles which mention people’s reaction about an offender who commits sexual abuse, but he has been sentenced for only twelve years. Obviously, thousands of negative comments of the controversy will not create a better world. To sum up, I totally advocate the death penalty in contemporary society.
In short, it is up to each person to think that whether capital punishment should be supported or not; however, there are always dark and bright sides of a matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, in short, kind of, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19437340153 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88358640299 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575447570332 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0401438227 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.894736842 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4210526316 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328686172368 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952723830685 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937098170168 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175415509648 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103421137141 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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