Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?
With the world in such economic turmoil,many of us face difficulties in maintaining our work/life balance and managing stress.There are a number of problems that people suffer as a result of this situation,but also some practical steps we can take.
Perhaps the largest problems is the issue of mental health.Modern lifestyles are highly pressurised, with people expected to work at a fast pace for extended periods,and little scope for family life or relaxation, leading to enormous stress and anxiety.This is especially true in countries experiencing economic recession,which has made the labour market increasingly competitive, and so workers are under pressure to cooperate in this process, fearing loss of promotion or even redundancy if they resist.Furthermore,previous studies have noted that depression often appears in individuals who are overweight or obese,which is commonly seen in most Western countries where most people work at desks and use transport rather than walk, weight gain seems inevitable.
Turning to possible solutions, the biggest step would be to improve the level of education regarding health issues connected to lifestyle,especially obesity. The government, media and schools should work together to raise awareness of the dangers and to promote sports and other positive practices. .Furthermore,to deal with the psychological impacts,employers could offer advice and coaching to staff in areas such as time management, stress control and relaxation techniques.This would help to reduce the anxiety that stems from heavy workload and thus allow workers to lead a fuller private life with less stress.
In summary,we can say that technology and economics are creating this situation,but also that the key problems of obesity and stress can be addressed through a combination of awareness, targeted legislation and better employment practices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, thus, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75627240143 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55595297814 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670250896057 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.448181201 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.666666667 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129404703513 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525098845217 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449814102576 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741823860079 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333158831019 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.