Many people believe that human beings have negative effects on the extinction of various kinds of species both on land and in the sea. This essay will present the possible causes of this issue as well as the appropriate remedies to deal with it.
The problem is attributable to 2 main reasons. One cause could be that the deforestation is more and more common. A number of people cut down trees to make way for building houses, factories and urbanization; to harvest timber to create commercial items such as paper, furniture, homes and to make more land available for farming. Consequently, this affects the living habitats of animals. Secondly, another cause could be that the plastic waste which is littered into the sea by fisherman living along the coast and tourists. Plastic is the hard-to-dispose material, which means they will hardly be recycled. When oceanic creatures consume plastic accidentally, they might choke on it. As a result, this leads to a steady decline in their population.
Various measures can be taken in order to address the problem. Firstly, the government should collaborate with authorities on controlling timber exploitation and strictly punish who violate the law. Besides, the government should raise awareness for people of forest resource protection as well as hazards of natural disasters caused by indiscriminate deforestation. Secondly, authorities should organize the campaigns to clean the beach every week and guide people not to throw garbage into the ocean directly. This can be done by placing rubbish bins and warning signs which indicate severe punishment along the coast.
In conclusion, the extinction of numerous animals results from many human activities, and there are several actions that can be taken to tackle this issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29225352113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84657565467 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5315333269 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859226016605 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259625934427 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608046316458 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749407226815 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632001775202 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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