Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In today' s technology era, working from home has gradually becoming a familiar phenomenon in our daily life. There are more and more people choosing to work or study from home rather than going to the workplace or school. In my perspective, I assume that this development is a positive one and my point of view will be examined and explained in-depth in the upcoming paragraphs.
It is genuinely admitted that with the assistance of the technology devices such as computers and mobile phones combine with the Internet, working and studying are much more convenient these days. People are no longer have to go to the offices since that can receive and do their job duties through emails or some online networks. There are a huge amount of applications or websites can help with connecting people and providing tasks. Zalo is an illustration for this, as we can see that most of companies or organizations today using Zalo as a mean of communication between staffs.
In addition, studying online is also considered a good way for learners because it allows people who cannot go to educational instituation for some reasons to obtain the knowledge they want. The useful of some online learning applications can be seen clearly in today's world. With the attack of corona virus this year, students have to stay at home to be safe and study online. With the existence of technology, teachers can teach the lesson for their students eventhough they are at home.
In conclusion, the cheap and accessible technology today have made the distant working and studying become easier is a positive development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
... some online networks. There are a huge amount of applications or websites can help wi...
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Line 2, column 489, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...lustration for this, as we can see that most of companies or organizations today using Zalo as a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94795539033 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7970463784 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9014093447 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262703647951 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925960209607 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758772856367 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163313624762 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788482889111 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.