Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
As telecommunication technology is improved rapidly, many online platforms were built in order to serve remote education. However, some doubt about the efficacy of this new pedagogical method. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons to explain why this is a promising improvement for the society.
On the one hand, online learning seems ineffective at first, due to a common fear of face-to-face interaction between teachers and students. However, with the born of virtual life on digital world, an interactive class would be well-established.
On the other hand, it is obvious that digital education is an affordable selection. Firstly, there will be insignificant expenditure on in-school facilities such as electronic system or projectors, hence lower tuition fee. Employing the advantage, universities worldwide have offer numerous admission-free online training course to those in need but cannot afford real-life classes. Additionally, in terms of standard education, since children now attend classes via the internet, school operators will no longer pay for caring services, for example, school bus and canteen.
Moreover, online schooling provides learners with easy availability. Distant learning gives access to ones that find usual class attendance difficult. People namely benefit from this are children living in rural areas, commuters, international students and the handicapped. If such people must attend traditional classes, chance of unexpected truancy are high.
Finally, leveraging the digital space allows educators to apply newly-developed invention, therefore enhances teaching quality. For instance, the Google, pioneering the online education software industry, has just introduced new virtual-life reality technology, which makes non-verbal interaction of participants are viable when teaching.
In conclusion, although traditional method has been showing essential importance in training field, internet-using education is surely a positive development because of low-cost practice and flexibility. In my opinion, this pedagogic trend should be highly encouraged. This is provided content used are explicit, qualified and legal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offered'.
Suggestion: offered
... advantage, universities worldwide have offer numerous admission-free online training...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05194805195 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21620695566 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724025974026 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0494902855 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10613075021 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295138100751 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282617028231 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501684025945 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277994228885 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.51 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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