Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity
Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas .
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Art requires the right of expression. I agree that for the development of innovative ideas and creativity, enough freedom should be given to artists but total freedom is not necessary.
In its various forms, art holds great importance in the tradition as well as contributing to cultural enrichment. It allows an individual to express his or her emotions and that is only effective if a significant amount of freedom is allowed. Any piece of art is created with immense hard work, dedication and patience and so it deserves to be acknowledged and appreciated.
Furthermore, many pieces of art have had religious and historical significance like The Last Supper by Leonardo Da Vinci, Mona Lisa, The Starry Night etc.
Artists don't only express themselves, but their work also induces thought provoking ideas and messages in the minds of the audience like self-growth, mental health awareness, women empowerment, the essence of love etc.
Also, many people are extremely talented and want to opt for the Arts as a profession. It is therefore important that freedom is provided so newcomers find it easier to adjust and express their ideas.
However, the works should not leave a deep-rooted negative impact on the society. Some artworks reflect extreme violence and disturbance that affects the mind of young people. Sometimes people feel that artists do not take their religious sentiments into consideration and that can create chaos in the community. For example, an artist in India painted a naked Hindu goddess that caused great anger amongst the Hindu community.
In conclusion, some form of freedom is essential for artists to flourish and promote their works as long as it does not impact the society negatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21146953405 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86340674052 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6722213782 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291643686092 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836346787377 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864446024548 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129447287795 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760361491207 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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