Recently, the number of casualties in young adults has escalated and driving motor vehicles is seen to be on of the prominent causes. I agree that government authorities should prohibit people under the age of 24 to drive such vehicles.
Event though in the busy schedules of people, faster means of transportation is essential and due to lack of public facilities having personal cars and motorcycles has become the new normal, I still believe that in the longer run, its better to go with banning the use of bikes for youngsters.
To begin with, teenagers, in spirit of excitement or distraction, often end up driving rashly and dangerously that leads to fatal consequences and injuries. Many of these youngsters try to copy and perform stunts such as one wheeling or riding motorcycles while laying flat that results in crashes and deaths. Moreover, statistics show that many young drivers killed had alcohol in their systems that resulted in extreme crashes.
It should be noted that majority of teens involved in motor vehicle accidents had no license and were not legally allowed to drive in the first place. Also, the families of the children face trauma because of the unimaginable loss of their loved ones. These deaths not only result in detrimental affects for the families of the teens who died but also the pedestrians that have lost their lives because of such accidents.
Moreover, I believe my banning motorbikes for teens, the use of public transport and carpooling will be promoted that will contribute less to air pollution and global warming.
In conclusion, to reduce crashes and to save lives its important that such crucial decisions are made by the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71898090152 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8081792075 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239969631575 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820172936069 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837306556745 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101386471804 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082715310638 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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