The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society.
Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles?
Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?
Arts have always played a crucial part in shaping the modern person’s attitudes toward the world. Nowadays, in connection with the unification caused by globalization, the value of arts reflecting the identity of a culture has increased drastically. To my mind, music and pictorial art are to be studied mandatorily by children in school but not to the detriment of other subjects
World integration in various spheres of life leads not only to the economic prosperity of latter-day countries, but also to the loss of a unique cultural code. Today the role of music and theater, preserving and transmitting the characteristics of a particular nation at the international level, has especially increased. For example, as per the record published by New York Times, in 2017, Germany has increased state funding for art to prevent the loss of its uniqueness due to the massive influx of migrants with a different cultural background. Thus, arts help to preserve the cult features of the nation distinguishing it in the world arena.
Love for art is to be instilled from an early age, therefore music and visual arts should be included in the school curriculum. Painting contributes to the sparking of the imagination and it is considered as one of the most effective ways of emotional relaxation. According to the Vienna University, children who practice pictorial art or music on a permanent basis are less prone to emotional breakdowns. Thereby, art should be taught to schoolchildren for providing emotional discharge and the development of their creative abilities.
Summing up, the role of art in nowadays’ world has been growing steadily due to necessity to preserve traditional cultural values in the era of globalization. With the reference of the importance of arts today, they are to be included in the education system to familiarize immatured minds with music, theater and painting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21241830065 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16144169197 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7758926099 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.916666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382181622917 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138876135112 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106570968267 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23541707544 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978942493941 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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