Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries.
How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?
The issue related to the choice of the future profession and life way has been crucial for all the representatives of society over the last centuries. Nowadays the problem of unemployment among youngsters gains momentum all over the world. This essay will discuss a few other difficulties school-leavers are supposed to face, with the expression of my agreement with the above-mentioned point of view.
I am firmly convinced that finding an appropriate job remains one of the most crucial problem of graduates due to their lack of occupational skills. To put it differently, employers do not endeavour to hire school-leavers, for their absence of working practice and professional knowledge. For example, according to the survey conducted by Moscow Sociological University, overwhelming majority of the young remain unengaged after leaving school. Thus, in my opinion, even in the twenty-first century unemployment among graduates is still considered to be one of the most significant problem.
Furthermore, not only do young individuals have to deal with hiring issues, but they also suffer from a lack of governmental support and benefits. Admittedly, even if the youngsters are employed, their salary is usually not high enough to cover all their daily needs. Therefore, special privileges for school-leavers ought to be instituted in order to provide an opportunity to invest money into their postgraduate education and private property. For instance, in some countries national financial projects exist, aimed to provide economic stability for young citizens. Hence, absence of financial and social support is regarded to be one of the issue face by school-leavers after graduation.
To conclude the theses stated above, I agree with the opinion of graduates` unemployment since employers do not strive to engage unskilled youngsters. Moreover, lack of governmental benefits and economic instability are another problems school-leavers have to solve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61952861953 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32914064791 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3813196525 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19981673317 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633544156315 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436238991817 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11884565604 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00823827248241 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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