Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries’
How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people
today?
It is true that joblessness is the huge concern for youth in today`s modernized world. However, I believe that now especially at a time of economic instability and social unrest, in addition to unemployment we are threatened by other, more globalized challenges, which we will discuss now.
On the one hand, due to the unprecedented increase in the unemployment rate, teenagers are likely to face huge problems. The biggest issue posed by joblessness is the rise in the crime rate among school-leavers. Owing to shortage of jobs, teenagers commit a crime in order to find money for their own subsistence. For instance, in the United State, the school dropouts commit approximately 75% of crimes. Furthermore, owing to joblessness, young, ambitious people migrate to western Europe because of career progression and job prospects. This phenomenon, exacerbating the problem for those remaining. As an example, young emigrants make up more than 10 percent of the overall 232 million international migrants, and, being the most mobile social group.
On the flip side, there are more enormous threats for adolescents. The most acute problem when it comes to teenagers is pathological state. In developing countries like India, Mexico, Reo an outbreak of coronavirus has caused countless youth deaths. For example, in Mexico, nearly one-fourth of the dead have been between 20 and 45. Besides, famine and malnutrition is the big concern for teenagers of some countries. Namely, Central African Republic, Zimbabwe, Haiti are most affected by hunger. It was reported that globally, there are 821.6 million people that are considered undernourished or starving.
To conclude, it seems logical to accept that joblessness is a major challenge for young people. Nonetheless, we cannot deny the fact that there are also numerous global challenges that are more urgent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3904109589 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06187366978 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7847450222 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144801633614 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383076824652 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027230141401 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821028109533 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320364245984 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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