Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Proper parenting methods have been a hot topic for the discussion since the appearance of this concept. A phenomenon exists that some parents raise their kids fulfilling all needs of the latters. I am convinced that this way of upbringing spoils kids and in the future causes various problems for them.
In my opinion, while maturing cocker children cannot normally root in the society and obtain a huge number of challenges. After entering the adulthood these people expect the similar attitude they are accustomed to from others. As a result individuals usually appear to be strong-headed and hysterical ones who cannot tolerate hearing any opposite opinions. For instance, my youngest sibling, Boris is the most spoiled in our family and even at the age of nine making friends is complicated due to his character. Hence, pursuance of all kids whims often deteriorates the fragile mind transforming it unfit to the standard community. I strongly believe that this way of education leads to many destructive consequences for the childs’ psyche. Offsprings usually possess no understanding of the difference between good and bad things for them. Unfortunately, while leaving the native home people of this type face melancholia as the environment does not satisfy their caprice. For example, according to the magazine “People online” published in Saint Petersburg, 80% of individuals raised in the all allowing family suffer from serious depression AT the elder age. Thus, mothers and fathers should explain kids their mistakes and help become an adult ready for this world.
To conclude, I am firmly convinced that the described way of upbringing is the best one to choose. It leads to the different issues such as heavy personality, inability to make friends or even depression.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26223776224 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88494594419 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657342657343 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0089761663 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242792660501 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660284439791 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477812120996 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137106901827 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873532239061 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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