Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Parenting has always been an integral part of human’s life, although this process requires awareness of the links between causes and outcomes. Proceed from that an opinion exists that parents are obliged to satisfy any wishes of their offspring in the form of actions and items. I do believe that this way of raising children is unhealthy and it is sure to result in distasteful consequences.
First of all, a baby who does not know the word “no” quickly loses a sense of proportion, which in turn leads to promiscuity. Immorality results in disorder and lawlessness, and every year the boundaries of normality in such a child will blur more and more. Unfortunately, these spoiled kids may end their lives in marginal circumstances without strict parental supervision. The pampered son of the Prime Minister of Dagestan went to prison for the reason he threw out of the window a girl who refused him. Thus, parents should set limits for their children in a timely manner in order to provide them with an adequate view of the world.
It should be noted that excessive indulgence of the young leads to a sense of impunity and loss of control. A person begins to believe that punishment will overtake them, because dad and mom never used any measures. Such a situation occurred in Novosibirsk when the drunk son of a deputy knocked down a woman and fled the scene of the crime. Teenagers who have not been instilled with an understanding of what is good and bad cannot objectively assess their motives and actions. The sixteen-year-old killer of Karina Zalesova conveyed that the motive of the crime was an interest in taking someone's life. Therefore, parents should give their descendants a clear understanding of how not to act in order not to create problems for themselves and others.
All things considering, permissiveness to the children spoils them as a person and leads to negative consequences. A false sense of impunity and lack of control will create many problems for such teenagers in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93841642229 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84775346176 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 12.5921602595 49.4020404114 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20612427438 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604619984312 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653391701528 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122915184612 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459249685457 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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