For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary.
To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?
The structure of the economy is constantly changing. It was Transformed to industrial one in the previous century and people gained an ability to purchase goods and services needed. An opinion by individual claims that shopping centers have switched their usual operating procedures and this should be considered as substantial disadvantage. Although I believe that alternation of shopping activity might be negative side pros of this process are tremendous.
First of all, placing different stores in malls can stimulate business activity and foster economic prosperity of the state. This results from the multiplier effect which is a key point in the development of the country, meaning that any change in the operating process can influence the whole economy. For example, during the Great depression in the USA in 1930-s policy conducted by Franklin Roosevelt called “New deal” was aimed at overcoming recession by attracting unemployed citizens to public works. Eventually these measures encouraged other industries to grow and the same logic could be implied to shopping malls. Thus, society can benefit from saturating shopping centers with a variety of different options.
Secondly, individuals can ?favor ( benefit)? from spending time in specially designed areas. Sharing our spare moments with the nearest and dearest can improve the well-being and health of the population. In 2010 the survey conducted by the group of British scientists displayed that people who participate in outside activities especially in interactive places such as malls less suffers from ailments. In other words, establishing interactive areas like food courts in shops can enhance physical condition of ones.
To conclude, this issue is a rather crucial, society should pay attention to the places where people can relax and interact with each other. The best ones are stores and shopping malls because of their location. Moreover, visiting these places can propel economic progress and the overall wellbeing of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59415584416 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87965415961 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2484200218 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131495851202 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409650033638 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328826080814 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081876671427 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204086810194 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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