Arts including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society.
Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle?
Should the art be included in the school programs?
Artistic sphere comprising arts, music and play which contributes to the achievement of mind triggering performance are examined as the crucial aspect of the society. I with confidence believe that the arts of such still and even in the future holds greater place among us as it is the only medium that preserves ancient doings and at the same time rescue us from stress. As of this great importance, as well as creativity it develops, arts should be a part of academic programs.
Arts plays its significant role in preserving almost every breakthrough in humankind through various creative methods that can be well understood. More to this, arts can also assist humans to flee away from the chaotic-realistic world. It is the medium that contributes to relax and thus motivate ourselves to operate our daily chores in greater speed and accuracy. For instance, as per the record published by New York Times, around 90% of people around the globe who are depressed tend to take the support of artistic elements as a feasible source to cure their problems by its half.
Unlike old days schools focusing only on curriculum do not perform well as children tend to be bright and smart, leading them to be much more creative than before. In such arts stands to have major role in boosting performance. Visualizing, creative thinking will be high among children that can develop brain performance and indirectly boost the overall development of children. For example, almost 70 % of the institution from developed countries are including arts as a study program as it was able to boost the performance of children and become ingenious in their curriculum as well as creativity. Thus, this concludes arts is the most noteworthy program for studying.
In conclusion, no matter how well developed and advance world gets arts holds its own significant position in preserving ancient importance and maintaining stress to its best level. Moreover, teaching artistic subjects can even assist children to outsmart others and rebuild the revolutionary world of their own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14836795252 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84838574547 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7518331115 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277946298373 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936392213803 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597839755511 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154662262161 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671036216052 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.