Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? To what extent do you agree or disagree
Residing in a foreign nation where majority of people understand their native language can result in catastrophic social and practical issues. I do strongly believe that such condition creates interaction problems, language and communication barrier and even these issues can significantly impact job as well as living lifestyle.
As of increasing globalization people travel through out the world to fulfill their thrust in education, jobs, research, business, with which social problems emerge. Basically, due to foreign language there persist major drawbacks while communicating and this language barrier as a result creates dramatic setback while carrying social activities. Moreover, misunderstanding and misinterpreting cultural activities, gesture, norms and values when living in foreign countries can create enormous social issues. For example, when European people travel to Asian counties like China, Japan the unique language, cultural difference, living style creates social problem.
Not only there arises social problem but also practical issues as with change in lifestyle there will be variation in skill set and also the foreigners are mostly not prioritized to hold higher posts until individual is deeply familiar with the culture, surrounding, religion and lifestyle. This skillset is only accomplished by few that takes years of struggle and learning. For instance, if a person from foreign nation applies for job interview there is much lower probability of being selected instead the opponent of same nation is approved. This is because of social and cultural differences and change of perception about foreigners as they are thought as of threat to business.
In conclusion, to be in foreign nation can create social and practical problems due to language barrier, living style, cultural difference, priority of the own. I opine that where ever people travel there persists these issues until foreigner completely understands the nation and makes them eligible to be completely familiar with these aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... increasing globalization people travel through out the world to fulfill their thrust in ed...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...completely familiar with these aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74257425743 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89876837771 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2704066938 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20083215893 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079383679267 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391747446084 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131845886217 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224084423191 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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