The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of households in two types of accommodation namely, owned and rented in England and Wales during the span of 93 years.

overall, number of households owned accommodation occupied minimum proportion and it rose with some difference until last hour when data fell gradually. Regarding rented accommodation the statistics was at its highest which had downfall with certain fluctuation and after the second last year it had steady rise.

Households in owned accommodation in the year 1918 was around 23 percent which then rose with the difference of around 10 percent and remained constant till 1953. The percentage increased with similar pace and in 1971 it reached 50 percent; same share was occupied by rented accommodation. Likewise, the percentage then reached to 60 in 1981, afterwards in 1991 the data rose to about 68 percent and later with increase of mere 1 percent it was around 69 percent in 2001. Finally, in 2011 percentage of households fell by around 6 percent.

Likewise, households in rented accommodation in the initial year (1918) was at its highest with percentage to be around 70, which in the later dropped gradually to around 68 percent and remained constant until 1953. Likewise, the proportion fell steadily in 1961 and managed to be constant with household in owned accommodation. The statistics fell moderately till 1991 to approximately 33 percent and had slight declination afterwards. However, in 2011 the percentage rose gradually to around 35 percent.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26639344262 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00919881018 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450819672131 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5231485857 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133399487117 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700397015391 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502007404744 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103934802403 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485105680699 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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