Some believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement
In this concurrent world people tend to believe that they have much more choices to choose from and I personally believe that this statement is completely aggregable as in almost every fields we do believe high varieties of options to choose from.
Regarding choices in our past people were deprived of options. They had to follow every discipline with limited choice, however, in the present time there are numerous options to choose from. Education of the past had limited subject to choose from and now there exists subjects that were never heard of ten year back. Every enthusiast can learn about subjects that they desire. For example, after accomplishing higher education in science students can choose subjects like aerospace as their future study out of other discipline to choose from. Thus, education now have wide varieties of subjects and there are unlimited options t o choose that can boost up their academic career.
Likewise, people do have various options in choosing their jobs. Unlike past, in present due to various set of skills people have varieties of jobs to choose from. For instance, people can have freelancing jobs and part time jobs, also they can have several skill-based jobs to work for. Thus, in every field there appears to be options to choose from and the number of choices keeps extending.
In conclusion due to broadening disciplines people in every fields have numerous choices and this assist to widen their horizon. I completely support the view and if used wisely these options will bring enormous change in human race.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e, people can have freelancing jobs and part time jobs, also they can have several skill-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05019305019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42804040576 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517374517375 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8659370429 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113952571358 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453431301565 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497905907326 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888847803671 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610371655406 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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