The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar graph compares information on households in two types of accommodation in England and Wales, measured in percentage, over an 83 years, from 1918 to 2011 years.
As an overall trend, it can be clearly seen that households in rented accommodation declined steadily, while owned accommodation increased progressively.
In 1918, the rented tendency was about 75% which was the highest trend, while owned demonstrated the lowest, at around 22%. Followed by, between 1939 and 1953, the former and the latter had a plateau just under 70% and over 30%, respectively. Subsequently, the rented accommodation continued to fall, whereas owned accommodation conveyed to rise, however, both data stagnated at half portion in 1971.
In contrast, after 10 years, they started to experience a converse trend, the rented accommodation dropped by 10% and the owned accommodation rose by 10%. During the next 20 years, both categories changed slightly, thus the first one reached the zenith, approximately at 70%, whilst another one showed the lowest percentage in comparison to periods. Although, at the end of period, the rented accommodation went up moderately about at 35%, but the owned accommodation was higher almost two times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, thus, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40932642487 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13667989634 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4517456706 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.5 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146459339742 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641738746268 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277294401824 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937088464746 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175183613518 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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