The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Life expectancy in future is a very debated question that both scientists and common people are trying to respond to. Even if science gets better everyday, it is proven that people's health does not simply go along its course. Although this statement, I personally think that maybe we have a chance to live longer in the future.
During the last centuries, in fact, life expectancy has reached such high levels that no one had never thought before. From the moment in which Fleming has discovered penicilline, lots of deaths due to a normal flu were avoided. Antibiotics have always been a very useful tool to combat illness related to bacterias.
Therefore today people do not die of cough anymore, and almost every viral influence does not end with a death. The average person has not problems related to infective illnesses anymore. Nowadays people are struggling with problems caused by their habits. There are more and more cases of diabetes and heart problems due to unhealthy diets rich on fats, to lack of physical activities and to smoking.
So we can definitely say that lot of diseases are caused by people themselves. Science and progress in this case will not be able to cure habits, but psychology could. According to my beliefs, in future this problem will be, at least, partially resolved and will improve people’s health. More and more people are changing their mind to live in a better way also today. By the way, there are lot of other diseases that can not be cured in such a simple way. In the case of cancer, for example, we can just hope that doctors one day will cure it.
In conclusion I can say that I am honestly positive and I think that in the future people health problem will be lower than today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...respond to. Even if science gets better everyday, it is proven that peoples health does ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...combat illness related to bacterias. Therefore today people do not die of cough anymor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, may, so, therefore, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72697368421 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43248293959 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7537881647 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5294117647 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195176798692 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583132968142 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568732605417 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109890800794 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669549008046 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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