It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
I think that the vast majority of geniuses in every field of human knowledge had their talent written in their DNA. By the way it would not be fair to address all their achievements just to their genes.
In music, for example, prodigy kids are discovered very often. These children find very easy to play a musical instrument: sometimes, even before they can read, they play nearly impossible arrangements, which normal people can not do even after lot of years of study. There are many of these examples in music history, starting with Mozart in the eighteenth century, passing through Paganini and in more modern times with Louis Armstrong.
Although this fact, it is clear that some men are born great, while others can achieve greatness. In fact the highest number of music players or sportsmen are normal people who are doing very well in their field. Lot of the most important orchestras of the world are made with people who studied a lot for their whole life and they are almost as stunning as their more gifted colleagues. So, taking musicians for example, even if maybe they can not reach the same outstanding performance of ones who are born with talent, they can still create fantastic music.
It is important to mention the fact that in both cases, all children, gifted or not, need to have a good teacher. Everyone, even Einstein, needed to go to school. If Leo Messi had not trained every day, we probably would not have had the same football player today.
In conclusion, some people are born with talent, others are not, but in my opinion everyone can play an instrument, or do an high level sport if he is taught by a good teacher.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, by the way, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72508591065 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39675879278 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8787937321 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237015731438 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755235244551 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634655653481 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121050933533 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808938017934 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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