Because of falling birth rates and better healthcare, the world's population is getting steadily older and this trend is going to cause serious problems for society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As a result of the decreasing number of babies born every year and an improvement in the health sector, the number of the older population has been increasing steadily. Therefore, it is said that this phenomenon leads to a crisis for society. Although the growing number of older people creates problems for the community, I partially agree with the statement as I believe that governments have been putting extra efforts to deal with this issue.
It is undeniably true that many countries in the world face serious problems caused by the rising number of the elderly population since many old-age people are not financially independent. The government have to allocate a large amount of money to support them such as providing shelters and daily necessities. As a consequence of a large amount of money investing in elderly programmes, some important public sectors might lack financial funding.
However, various approaches have been taken by the government to deal with the elderly people crisis. In developed nations, for instance, the workers have been urged to save more money for their pension. This way, they can have a sufficient amount of money which can be used to support themselves in their final period of life. Another method that has been employed by the government is empowering older people. This programme provides a job for the retire people who want to work to gain extra money. This programme is proven reducing old-age financial dependency and eventually lessening the nation’s responsibilities.
In conclusion, despite causing various problems for the community, the effects of the growing number of older people can be minimised by launching pension scheme and empowering the retired individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ople. This programme provides a job for the retire people who want to work to gain extra m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27898550725 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85627457588 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2853474258 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180890177714 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648628757492 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515637345888 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112078476181 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486937893358 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.