'The best way to educate children is by using the internet in every lesson'. To what extent do you share this opinion ? what other ways are there of making lessona effective for children ?
Internet is as an essential part of students life these days, as many of educational organization use internet to educate pupils in every subject. I believe that internet use in teaching is highly effective in spite of there are other way which we should consider to take into account.
Regarding the internet-learning method, it can be seen that internet appeals to the students in term of studying, particularly in the way students understanding the lesson. Since internet provides pupils the variety of lesson demonstration which would help students to gain knowledge much easier. furthermore,internet is also affordable compared with traditional method which still uses hand book, in result it leads to wisely spending. for instance, the internet offers learning sources in the form of document and articles. Finally by using online media in education will enhance students to involve in a movement to save nature and shield the trees as well since paper-based deeds in lesson is less.
turning to other ways, we should introduce nature to school child by doing observation directly or establishing green nature school. it is positive way to build student's critical thinking and curiosity about something they never experience. Moreover, field-monitoring visit is a crucial part in education either. for instance, ancient artefact or museum visit probably might increase sense of belongings which is influenced by stories from the past.
all in all, in a wrap, i feel that internet-using in education is proved to be an effective way to educate school child. Besides, direct lesson is still important as well to make it completely perfect method in school teaching way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32706766917 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08516544167 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.508070071 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222857612975 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789390819416 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463202602102 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146930686503 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502000552738 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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