The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that the best method to ensure the development of adolesence is to make adults take parenting courses. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits for the young generations life. The following essay will analyse this statement in deatil.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern technology that individuals are just concentrate on their occupation, so parenting courses is hugely significant for the society. Not only wil this phenomenon provide various appropriate way for teaching their children, improving the mentality life of teenagers, but also socioeconimic can be narrowed where all teenagers have opportunity to nature in well education. Furthermore, more relationship will be created by the parent who have numerous possitve affection for their children. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Clide Hood, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of postgradutes who have bright education in New York. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a plenty of achievement in their career.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the children potential. A lot of time and investment have been spent by the adults, so some of them can not pay attention in their field and also in some situation reality exerience is more effective for the children. Moreover, many managers of courses take advantage from this investment for their own profits, harmful influence will be led by this action to the youngs.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some nagative aspect for the society. The parent need ti have clear plans to advances their children for the nation development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83336037851 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0436638703 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16995773258 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665761162124 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778215040608 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111524839031 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043474398135 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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