The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary world, due to the fact that the incident of juvenile delinquency is escalating, it is suggested that parents should be equipped with parental skills. While this is one effective way to curb unlawful actions of the youth, I believe that the role of schools and governments is also significant.
On the one hand, parental skills should be mastered by parents who have deep impact on the reduction of crime rate among adolescents. Firstly, well-educated parents know how to balance the demands of home and work and devote more time and thought to raising and educating their offsprings.In particular, this enables them to shape their child's personality and control his behavior by offering him moral lessons at the beginning of his formative years. Secondly,when provided with proper skills,mothers and fathers can suppress their anger and prevent domestic violence in front of their offsprings. To be specific,if children are exposed to violent acts in a dysfunctional family , they will exhibit behavioral problems at school and later turn into crime.
On the other hand, children can not become law-abiding citizens, unless there is governments and educational institutes' responsibility. Government should implement a policy of zero tolerance to act as a deterrent to misconduct by youngsters.For instance, some stringent laws are suggested including capital punishment, life imprisonment and corporal punishment to tackle juvenile delinquency and uphold an ordered society. As for schools, surveillance cameras need to be installed , which not only aids in the safety of the schools but also helps supervisors control the actions of students and have better classroom management. Moreover, civic education should be incorporated into core curriculum ,therefore, the youth will be able to distinguish between right from wrong and avoid violating the law.
In conclusion, because of the rampant crime rate among young people, I think that besides the education for parents, schools and governments should also be responsible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56230031949 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13031970995 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635782747604 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8299131198 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.272727273 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8181818182 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200395792655 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074055921786 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060909612752 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122128499784 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769697220557 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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