Undoubtedly, the crime rates are increasing day by day due to technology and unawareness. Some skeptics put an argument that giving education to the parents regarding parental skill to decline the crimes onto the society. I agree with this assertion, I am going to shed some lights on this notion.
Everyone knows that parents are the bosom friends to the children. To commence with, firstly, it is pivotal to educate the parents about parental skills because mother and father both better know about their children's behaviour as well as nature. Ergo, it is easy to handle their young one, they can give better education regarding bad habits to their teenagers. To elaborate, the survey conducted into 2005, in which it is demonstrated that parents should indulge their children into extra curriculum activities, as a result theye prohibit their children from bad activities. Secondly, government should arrange campaign for parents. In which, they can give counselling to parent about various skills also knowledge regarding crimes which are happening in this contemporary era. For example, awareness program held by local organisation which help the parents regarding various suitation.
On the file side, after family, it is prominent responsibility oswal the society as well as the teachers because children live in a society,where experienced people live. They have enough knowledge to handle the situation. Elders should give education to the young one about crimes ando also educate then about the severe consequences like wise, so that children become aware and avoid these kinds of activities. Besides this, teachers are the second guru of the students. They should create awareness among between the students like they educate about moral and ethics values.
To recapituate, parents and society both should educate the younger people about the crime rates and tell about its results. Parents can help theiron child because they can tell about the truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48064516129 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63726003243 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0966845018 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163893273201 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581483214653 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507725429215 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108435812048 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598343233391 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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