Unfortunately, in contemporary era, competitions have vital part of young's life as well as in curriculum field. No doubt that, the competition is divided into plethora of ways like sports, art, academic competitions and so on. Therefore, sports activities are essential to cope with various situations so, government should not be banned the youth to participate in games. I am in full accord with this notion and I am going to throw some light on points below.
There are tremendous reasons which support my views. To commence with,firstly, competitions help the teenagers to know their best out of one capability with this, they become able to cope with their weakness. As a consequence, juvenile can build self-esteem which helps the children to compete with anyone and win success in their life. Secondly, sports encourage the young people to work in a team which helps the people to learn immense things and become eager towards their work like cooperation, understanding, communication skills besides, teenagers can enhance their cognitive skills as well as leadership quality. To elaborate, in future, children can choose their career as leader or sportsmen according to their interest and these qualities help the masses to overcome with their problems.
In addition, physical activities or competitions are essential to agile their health physically as well as mentally because games require of body's movement which makes the human's body parts more flexible. Games competitions are milestone in young people's life furthermore, sports help the teenagers to broken their knowledge because they meet plenty of people and get know about their culture and their lifestyle which helps in their daily routine. As I above mentioned that, games help the youngster to maintain their healthylifestyle and also adjust in worse situation.
To recapituate, I firmly belive that sports should not be banned for young people because this stage is their learning stage if they face ups and downs in life they can learn and understand better for their need related to their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30722891566 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84898364247 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2995946319 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147773984546 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585634413963 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707844710853 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114758739509 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060145656484 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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