Increasing amount of pollutions emitted into the environment is a real issue, although I disagree that increasing cost of fuel is the best way how to solve it, however, I believe that there are another measurements to tackle it.
Undoubtedly, increasing number of operated motor vehicles, not only cars, but also planes follows with more pollutions emitted into the environment. However, increasing price of fossil fuels should be helpful, necessity of transportation can not be overtaken. Not only people have to move, for work or leisure, but also goods have to be transported to satisfied either local or global markets. As a result of increasing price of fuel, will members of public have to spend more for petrol against using their budgets for more useful things such as entertainment or holidays. Furthermore, all other commodities will rise in price.
Although, I believe that there are another ways how to tackle environmental problems. Firstly, such multinational companies like Coca-Cola and Pepsi should definitely stopped produce their drinks into the plastic bottles. Every day, millions of single-used plastic bottles are throw into rubbish and not future recycled. Even though, plastic bottles can be recycled, they are still transferred into another plastic product, which needs to be earlier or later has to be recycled. However, despite the fact that technology have developed in last decades, modern techniques are still not enough sophisticated to recycle secondly recycled products.
However, the most important is global awareness. Members of the public should be educated from early stage of their life, how negatively their behaviour might affect not only local, but also global eco-system. Global warming is a real threat for modern society and its history is not long, just over two decades, modern society erased uncountable number of species. Bot not only fauna is in dangerous. For example, Salkantay track as an alternative way to Machu Picchu is predicted to be without a snow experience, at altitude of 6,000metres above the sea level, within 10 years. People should be shown real examples of what modern lifestyle cost our environment.
In short, I believe that increasing price of petrol might be a way how to solve current environmental problems, however, its not a best way, and follows with serious consequences. Although, I feel that there are another solutions how to remedy not only global environmental problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her commodities will rise in price. Although, I believe that there are another ways ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'stop'
Suggestion: stop
...e Coca-Cola and Pepsi should definitely stopped produce their drinks into the plastic b...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...urrent environmental problems, however, its not a best way, and follows with seriou...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...nvironmental problems, however, its not a best way, and follows with serious cons...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and follows with serious consequences. Although, I feel that there are another solution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, i feel, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34190231362 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87878945238 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539845758355 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4130308969 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.368421053 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15014190385 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474819641077 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682655738767 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110614406968 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796520153712 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.